Subject: [alto] Comments on ALTO OAM YANG draft

From: Qin Wu <[email-masked]>
Date: Sat, 19 Mar 2022 15:17:56 +0000

Hi, authors:
I have read through draft-zhang-alto-oam-yang and believe it is on the right track, a few comments and suggestions as follows:
1.server to server communication part hasn't been documented yet?
2. Do we have a separate section to discuss access control management?
3. Example Module for Information Resource Creation algorithm are documented in both Appendix A
and section 7? Is there any reason for that?
4. Would it be great to provide a few JSON examples for ALTO O&M Statistics, Data Source in the Appendix?

-Qin