Subject: More Additional Comments on Clarifications

From: "Douglas E. Engert" <[email-masked]>
Date: Fri, 15 Nov 2002 11:28:58 -0600

This is a second set of comments from me on the Clarifications:

Section 1.5 Environmental Assumptions. 

  All of these are now also likstd in Section 10 Security Considerations,
  so why do we stil have section 1.5?

Section 1.6 Glossary of terms
  
  This should have Encryption Type, and KVNO. There may be others as well.

Section 3.7 User to User Authentication Exchange
  
  "(This entire subsecrion is new)" needs to be removed. It has a few spelling 
  errors. 

Section 4

  Reference to section 8.4 in 6th paragraph should be 7.5.1 

  What is reference to "[4.1]" in last paragraph?  
 
Section 5.2.2 

  Reference to section 7. should be 6.1
 
  Reference to section 7.2 should be 6.2

Section 5.2.5

  Reference to section 8.1 should be 7.5.3

Section 5.2.6 AuthorizationData

  In the paragraph "In the definitions that follow,..." c  The value of 
  the ad-type is being tied to the subsection number!!!   
  It should refer to section 7.5.4 where these types are enumerated. 
  
  But section 7.5.4 lists 8 basic types, but section 5.2.6 only describes
  4 of these, 1, 4, 5 and 8 which appear to be the only encapsulating types. 
  5.2.6 Should list all of them, indicting how they should be used. 

   
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 Douglas E. Engert  <[email-masked]>
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