Subject: [savi] Review of draft-ietf-savi-dhcp-03

From: Christian Vogt <[email-masked]>
Date: Fri, 4 Jun 2010 15:52:43 -0700

Jianping, Jun, Fred, and Guang:

Thank you again for your hard work on document draft-ietf-savi-dhcp-03. 
I reviewed the document and found that some parts of the document are
already in very good shape, while others need some improvement.  Please
find my review here:

http://christianvogt.mailup.net/reviews/vogt-2010-review-of-draft-ietf-savi-dhcp-03.pdf

I suggest that you submit a new document version based on my review
comments.  It would also be great if you could supplement the new
version with a summary of how you addressed the review comments.  Please
send this summary to the SAVI mailing list.

Thank you, and best regards,
- Christian