Subject: [Teas-ns-dt] a new review of the isolation text

From: Jari Arkko <[email-masked]>
Date: Thu, 25 Jun 2020 14:52:49 +0000

Reza et al,

I like the new text (I looked at the GitHub version).

The breakdown to three separate issues was helpful!

A minor suggestion (clarifying the role of the technique and fixing one typo):

OLD:

   For instance, dedicated resources can help assure that traffic in
   other slices does not affect a given slice.  Simillarly, traffic
   separation can ...

NEW:

   For instance, dedicated resources is one technique that can help
   assure that traffic in other slices does not affect a given slice.
   Similarly, traffic separation can ...